Thursday, November 1, 2012

My Fairy Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I alighted from the express electric train,
My eyes traveled to the happy people;
Concentrated smiles of contentment playing
On the nourished faces
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Stephen Olufemi Omolara
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Michael Oliver 07 November 2012

Like the twist on 'lived happily ever after' Like the image painting of City life and the introduction of a quasi wicked fairy. Subtle piece of construction and playing with form.

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Omolara Eunice Olubunmi 04 November 2012

This is a wonderful piece, full of irony and suspense.

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Stephen Olufemi Omolara

Stephen Olufemi Omolara

Ode-Aye, Ondo State, Nigeria
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