Tuesday, April 29, 2008

My Fair Lilly Comments

Rating: 4.9

my fair lilly
i look at you
and i see a gem unknown,
a glistining star in a lonely sky
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hamid kareem
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silver phoenix 12 August 2008

This one i found it so special i added it to my favs. 10/10 ofcourse.The poem speaks for itself. Keep up the great work

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Waqas Naeem 24 June 2008

beautiful poem...serene and lovely!

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a beautiful write Hamdid. who was your muse to this poem? i like to know backgrounds behind the poem because they influence the write so very well.

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Nkululeko Mdudu 30 April 2008

your style is that of the past, your voice is that of the present, beautifull poem.

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Lacey Unknown 29 April 2008

I don't know what to say about this one other than it has a truly simple beauty to it that cannot be denied. ~Lacey~

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Austin Zaratzian 29 April 2008

i had a lilly once, i still miss her

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