Monday, June 21, 2010

My Eyes Tell A Story... Which One Are You Reading Comments

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What do you see when you look into my eyes
Do you see a lost soul
Can you see my hearts cries
Do you see death taking control
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Lil Love Goddess vs. Angel of Death
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veronique buea pre 04 August 2010

marvlous words i loved it ;)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 July 2010

‘Do you contemplate saying 'I Love You' Are you thinkin of more lies Or, for once, are you thinking of being true’ ~ Poetry on questionnaires and readers are at liberty to take their own conclusion …it is very popular way of constructing poetry…and you’ve brilliantly done that Yeah I believe why poet will say all answers…let the readers contemplate on…well methinks stare/glance [s/g] swapping if very deep/unalloyed …the very answers come form the s/g…… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Please post poems for us please... n

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Jamie English 24 July 2010

Wow! That is brilliantly written. You are a very talented writer. I can really relate. I get very frustrated and sad when people look at me and they don't realise that I'm crying inside. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Made me smile :)

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