Thursday, January 10, 2008

My Eyes Don'T Like The Sun Comments

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My eyes don't like the sun

which is a pity
because it's pretty
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Francesca Johnson
sun
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Zoe Howarth 28 August 2008

this poem made ma laugh xD i loved it. nice work xD zoe. xx

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Bob Blackwell 27 April 2008

Fran I'll take the warm sun anyday and wear transition lens which go dark and light in tune. I love to feel the warm sun on my back, it makes me feel alive. I like this one. Bob

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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2008

that is why we need to prioritise. the eyes are made for them. so listen to your eyes. good one francesca.

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Meggie Gultiano 13 January 2008

ha ha..you have placed me in a dilemma too.. Nice write..enjoyed it

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okeydokey #3 12 January 2008

well...that is a good one...it is so interesting how you...write about the most...everyday things...and yet...your poetry shines...this is good...and ernestine northover must be tripping...whoo...

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Well now. My eyes do like your poetry. I can't assist you in this dilemma however. :) t x

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Duncan Wyllie 10 January 2008

Dear Fran This aches to read, I too can sympathise, what a stunning piece to read, Love duncan X

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