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For too long I've been burdened with The worries that have made me weak, And now I feel I'm free at last To find the joy that I do seek. .......................................... Andrew, These are remarkable a words, but I think that the careful person is the most reliable in freedom.. 10.. All best, Tsira

Lovely news Andrew. Beautifully expressed in this poem. As always I so enjoy reading your work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Ah...when the spirit sours, nothing can compare or beat it Well done again with this one Andrew Both, the rhyming structure and content are beautiful Love duncan X

A delightful poem Andrew, lovely sentiments so clearly expressed! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

A wonderfully uplifting poem Andrew, we have to leave the past behind and move on, even though sometimes it is hard to do, Lynda xx *10*

Yes, you are free only if you come out of the world of imagination and the see reality which is full of wonder to discover as you fly high in the air!

a beautiful poem filled with so much hope love the lines and the whole Idea

Another beautiful poem written with hope. I'm glad your eyes were opened to everything before you. Very well written, a ten from me. Kind regards, Kathleen