I have donated
My eyes
While still alive,
To my dreams
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I often wonder, is it that what is visual more sensual or the other way round? Thank you, Poet Alyx
What a wonderful read! The relationship between eyes and dreams is very strong. Beautifully penned.
Dreams are of two types, those bless us or dread us in our sleep and what we dream in the wakeful hours. One might think that eyes play no part in either. But they do, as Nosheen points out. Thank you Nosheen
Poet Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You, Amber.
Immense gratitude to Dear Poet Mr CN Premkumar for appreciating the poem. The comment, feels great
You are so very creative endlessly, Unnikrishnan! A very pleasure to read.5 Stars top score!
Most encouraging words of appreciation. Ever grateful, Sylvia
A nice piece of appreciation, Dear Anjandev. Thank You
Here after let them dream... A beautiful poem of such emotion and heart! ... So deeply moving! ... Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
Thank you, respected poet, for the appreciation you have expressed and adding it your fav. Obligated
sacrifice the precious of life but do not make you beggar in that sacrifice!
Without dreams we can not live. Dreams give meaning to life..--gives a purpose to live.Those eyes were dreaming and now those dreams keep you lively
Thank you Bharati, for the beautiful words. We do dream when are asleep, and in our wakeful hours too.
But more than these dreams, we need to have dreams about our future, the life ahead and should NOT allow those dreams to remain mere dreams to
Thank you, Bharati. Our dreams are often interred, not allowed to see the light of the day
Our eyes are our window to the world and also a mirror on ourselves.
My gratitude to you, David, for the insightful comments and inspiring words. Thank you
Your comment here is quite a pertinent comment of life. Please add it to your quotes for all the members to read and enjoy. Else, you may develop it into a nice poem. Thank you.
This verse makes me feel like I'm in a dream. In just a few words you have managed create an entire universe. Brilliant!