Wednesday, February 16, 2022

My Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have donated
My eyes
While still alive,
To my dreams
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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M.J. Lemon 10 July 2024

This verse makes me feel like I'm in a dream. In just a few words you have managed create an entire universe. Brilliant!

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Alyx Thru Edge 03 July 2024

An short ode to the visual and sensual

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I often wonder, is it that what is visual more sensual or the other way round? Thank you, Poet Alyx

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Nosheen Irfan 16 June 2024

What a wonderful read! The relationship between eyes and dreams is very strong. Beautifully penned.

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Dreams are of two types, those bless us or dread us in our sleep and what we dream in the wakeful hours. One might think that eyes play no part in either. But they do, as Nosheen points out. Thank you Nosheen

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Poet Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You, Amber.

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Immense gratitude to Dear Poet Mr CN Premkumar for appreciating the poem. The comment, feels great

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PREMKUMAR C N 05 October 2022

Creativity and poetry in its simplest form Brilliant poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2022

You are so very creative endlessly, Unnikrishnan! A very pleasure to read.5 Stars top score!

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Most encouraging words of appreciation. Ever grateful, Sylvia

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Anjandev Roy 21 April 2022

Fine piece indeed.....

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A nice piece of appreciation, Dear Anjandev. Thank You

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2022

Here after let them dream... A beautiful poem of such emotion and heart! ... So deeply moving! ... Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

My gratitude to you, Becca

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Sophie French 17 February 2022

So fantastic!

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 February 2022

Thank you, respected poet, for the appreciation you have expressed and adding it your fav. Obligated

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 February 2022

Unique donation....loved the creative thinking.5******

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Obliged to you, Sir

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

sacrifice the precious of life but do not make you beggar in that sacrifice!

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Immense gratitude for the kind words of encouragement

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Thank you for your words of appreciation.

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Thank you, dear poet, for your appreciation of the poem

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Bharati Nayak 16 February 2022

Without dreams we can not live. Dreams give meaning to life..--gives a purpose to live.Those eyes were dreaming and now those dreams keep you lively

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Thank you Bharati, for the beautiful words. We do dream when are asleep, and in our wakeful hours too.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

But more than these dreams, we need to have dreams about our future, the life ahead and should NOT allow those dreams to remain mere dreams to

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Thank you, Bharati. Our dreams are often interred, not allowed to see the light of the day

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Thank you, LeeAnn for Five Star

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David Wood 16 February 2022

Our eyes are our window to the world and also a mirror on ourselves.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

My gratitude to you, David, for the insightful comments and inspiring words. Thank you

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Your comment here is quite a pertinent comment of life. Please add it to your quotes for all the members to read and enjoy. Else, you may develop it into a nice poem. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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