Tuesday, October 27, 2009

My Eyes. Comments

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My eyes are weary,
For the things i yearn to see,
Your lips touching mine,
Waiting for my true chance,
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Dilshan Boange 27 October 2009

Truly a powerful expression of emotions which capture elements of the mundane and the fantastical which speaks in an inner voice that reflects a psyche that searches for a reality that cannot be....the imagery evokes very deep meaningful impressions and creates a picture that conveys notions of addressing the reader in relation to what is physically perceptible as well as metaphysical and of a more psychological plane...the feeling of being a 'stalker' suggests a conciousness which is questioning its own place in the scheme of emotions and the concurrent actions. A great piece of poetry.

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