My Eyes Comments

well...seems talking and speaking eyes with a lot of good impressive effects... really a good and realistic poem...well written and courageous way of expressions... love this stanza of the poem very much.. My eyes are so nice I keep gazing at the mirror thrice so I must take care of my eyes to see the world rise. yes... eyes are every thing in the face and good you got best eyes as you said so... wonderful 10+++++++++

Beautiful eyes. Very well written.I really like it.

A most charming and clever poem. Has an endearing lightness. Must have got a good grade surely. A ten from me anyway. Paul.

Good poem. Often we neglect our eyes. Yes we should take care of them

Yes young lady your eyes are beautiful use them for all that is beautiful in this world close them to the ugliness 10 Chris

I am fond of eye. Its like ocean.Dive there to the bottom, you will not die. Dear Joan, I like it. Its really a good piece.

Truly beautiful. It moves in such a light and friendly manner.

This poem is what I dreamed of once and now you granted me my wish.

A great write Joan, keep writing. - Raj Nandy

True, we should take best care of our eyes, which help us to see the outside world.

The eyes are the window to the soul, so they say. An excellent poem.

Your eyes are nice and light like a child.Your simplicity your charm. x

' Your eyes are the light of your heart that's sees happiness and sadness' - Ravi Your poem is very good Thanks for sharing

so I must take care of my eyes to see the world rise. Fine composition! Your eyes want to see 'world rise' is something great! ....well done