Thursday, August 27, 2020

My Expectations Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nobody here offers my anguish

It is your look that never blows up
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Shakira Nandini
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Yoonoos Peerbocus 28 August 2020

the light of life does not diminish here....my choicest line..interesting piece

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Kostas Lagos 28 August 2020

This world doesn't share anybody's pain Excellent! Thanks for posting

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 August 2020

Deep write. Emotionally powerful. Yeah, I can feel the pain and sadness in the lines. 'My sensitive throats didn't leave tears in my eyes Where there is a fire, there is no dew For what reason would it be a good idea for us to have trust from the world? This world doesn't share anybody's pain, '... is simply awesome. Thanks for sharing.10++

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