Saturday, February 18, 2006

My Ex- I Want To Hurt Him Comments

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My ex is having a grant time
I am not!
What a waste of time
I don’t get it
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Margo Reid
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***** ********* 21 February 2006

Good poem and good advice from Patricia, remember though, that men are strange, your poem reminds me of the saying as a child, about the boys who pulled your plaits, they were the ones that really liked you. Enjoy your child and chill out, nothing ever stays the same. A good thing to remember when you feel low. It is very true. Did you mean 'fair' instead of 'fear'? They both work well. 10 from Tai

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Patricia Gale 20 February 2006

As a great mentor once said, 'It's ok to think those things, just don't do them.' So it's ok, think on. Nicely written. Patricia

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