My Eternal Wish Comments

Such a deep emotion..... Again a master piece... i loved it..... a wish to cry once more..... it's very deep n intense.... keep it up..........

'I being my culprit'.. We are captors of our own destined wills.. to shed but a tear once more.. to find peace within... I enjoyed the idea behind this.. Nicely done Wendy

a good expessive write my friend...I liked it...10

I loved how you expressed the words in this poem.