Thursday, August 30, 2012

My Eternal Twin Comments

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I hate this woman!
She puts me in such situation
That I'm taken advantage of
Used and abused, thereof
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Asif Andalib 28 October 2012

An awesome write. I love it.

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Saadat Tahir 27 October 2012

Why can't I just be me? if you could solve just this one...u would be an instant celebrity.... lovely lines...cheers sat

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Carsten Thomsen 23 October 2012

..one of your better poems, I can I can totally relate to this…

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

People can't make out between me and her Neither can I. Leaves me confused being in her shell Moving with her limbs and draped in her skin - stunning 10+++

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