Tuesday, March 18, 2014

My Esoteric Half Comments

Rating: 5.0

A life time of happening
My little heart is flooded with
Filled to the rim experiences pour
Like waters in deep ocean
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Valsa George 27 March 2014

More than what we experience directly when we are awake, the mind has hidden chambers and our subcoscious mind is so active, always alert.... even when our eyelids are sealed in sleep and our senses, at rest! It lights up the dim corners... and what all terrible secrets it hides...! Yes human mind is just mysterious... Enjoyed this deep write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 March 2014

Experiences pour Like waters in deep ocean Only a few understand this. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

outstanding imagery makes this poem so alive u are a master mam love it so much

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V P Mahur 20 March 2014

Dear Madam, The imagery of this poem is fantastic and flow is polite. Thanks for nice poem. I will try more of your poems and tell my views. please reply if possible. Thanks.

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