My Escape Comments

Terrific work Ernestine you have captured the mood perfectly here. Love, Andrew x

Dear Ernestine To have no commitments at all is not always freedom, sounds strange doesn't it, but sometimes it can be the things that we find difficult that can really release us, A very thought provoking poem, Love Duncan

Lucky those who can make that existential leap... when they have no commitments. Enjoying your poems Ernestine, even the sad ones. Linda

Many of us are tied to commitments that we can't escape and so we put our dreams on hold - perhaps one day....... (I'm giving you a 10 to counteract that first undeserved 3) avr

I really like and feel this poem! Bob Dylan has a line, 'I tell myself something's coming, but it never does.'

Sometimes things look dim but you got to find the light...you can do it Ernestine

dont give up on the dream Ernestine if we keep dreaming we will realize our dreams if we stop they die and so do we warm regards allan