My Eros Comments

Brave utterances set aside for sober reflection. An insightful rendition embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Shelly.

Very good poem on love transforming a lonely life. A 10.

Thanks poet Rajnish manga sir.

In our society, this subject has always remained a taboo. The poem is hot enough to melt even a stone-heart. Great work, Kiran.

Dear Jez Brul Thanks.

Thanks jazib kamalvi .

Unnikrishnan E S, Thanks a lot. The poem is love poem,it has nothing do with social or gender ineq

Hi Shelly, And the poet, you to my favourite poet list

A good start with a nice poem, Shelly K. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Hi Shelly, Welcome to Poemhunter. Congratulations for the wonderful poem. The poem invokes some serious thoughts about the status of women in the Indian Society. Barren is a word which should not be used to define a woman. The usage is totally and blatantly male chauvinistic. So it is to be detested. My request to all poets is that we should stay away from such things. Coming back to the poem. A wonderful, emotionally charged narrative. Qualify for a 100. To my poem list.