My End-Τέλος Μου Poem by Kostas Lagos

My End-Τέλος Μου

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Like a vulture

driven by

the scent of death,

you always

accompany me,

my friend

my lover

mybreath

my end



Σαν γύπας

που τον οδηγεί

του θανάτου η οσμή,

πάντα

με συνοδεύεις,

φίλη μου

ερωμένη μου

ανάσα μου

τέλος μου

Saturday, March 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lidia Hristeva 09 December 2019

Depression is palatable only to its victims of death. But we belong to life instead. Beautifully expressed...

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Valsa George 11 March 2019

Depression can follow one like a vulture following a dead body! But he should be kept at bay! Powerful write!

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Kostas Lagos 12 March 2019

Thank you Valsa. You're right

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C F 04 March 2019

This poem, as many of the others you wrote, has such a cynical twist and tone, that it makes me read ythem 10,20 times before I grasp their meaning. And even then, I often ask myself if your profound thoughts were properly understood. Your poems have a simplicity yet power that is difficult to describe.

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Kostas Lagos 04 March 2019

Thanks a lot Chito! ! !

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Jankovic Zoran 03 March 2019

Excellent. Breathe deeply tKostas. I wrote the poem for my death and I told her I'm not afraid of it. That certainly is not the end. Still have to breathe deeply.

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Kostas Lagos 04 March 2019

Yes, we have to. Thank you Zoran

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M Asim Nehal 02 March 2019

Amusing poem, what a metaphor you chose to write this poem, simply brilliant..100++

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Kostas Lagos 04 March 2019

Thank you Mohammed, thanks a lot!

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