Sunday, November 12, 2017

My Emotions (Storm Part I) Comments

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Long, long I travel… Do I know my desire?
All things laid by… Passing like a storm…
Is there any end to rest my soul in ceasefire?
Walking through the circles… Nowhere to go… Can smiles of glory be spread in a row?
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Bhagyashree Gunjikar (Naik)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

Beautiful poem on emotion and love having stunning expression and nice collocations. I quote.. Rains of happiness last for a while… Suddenly disappear like flash of light…. Thank u dear Bhagyashree, keep on writing.10

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Bhagyashree 12 November 2017

Thanks a lot.. means more to me

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 November 2017

Such a brilliant poem, Bhagyashree....10++++

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Bhagyashree 12 November 2017

Thanks a lot.. means more to me...

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