My Emotions Betray Me Comments

Deep words. Still you could've worked more on the music.

well said well put, a strong poem indeed!

Great job there young man...Keep writing and let the feeling come from the heart. Nice!

this poem shows true love. how you waited and waited with never ending love and hope. it shows the sacrifice we must make for love. once again you aren't just writing words, your feeling them. that is the sign of a true poet. i must say that this is my favorite poem by you so far.

A rare beauty, the top of admiration, you have seen is in your heart. Memories of her....flooded mind- Wonderful imagination! Her memories become the west wind of Shelley to blow across your flooded mind. Don't make us to be envious of your fancy.

very nice great emotional piece thanks for the write..

Beautiful piece.Thanks brother.

Guy ? will go places wif dis ? knw