Monday, September 14, 2015

My Emotions Comments

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Though my emotions don't show,
I have a life, a mind, and a soul.
I may be hard to understand,
But if you listen, you might be able to hold my hand.
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Belinda Ward
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Dr Antony Theodore 15 September 2015

Though my emotions don't show, I have a life, a mind, and a soul. You are the one to lighten up my world and cast away my fiery pit of pain. Few times I can't say I love you, These expressiong I liked very much: My fiery pit of pain haunted by things of the past, my will to love love is very complicated.. you are so young Belinda. it needs a lot of experience. For me love is a great mystery. i think love should remain a mystery because love is created by a God who is only Mystery for a human mind. Please go on writing. Writing poems has a effect of Catharsis. it brings purification of the mind and soul. God bless you Belinda

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