My Emerald Dreams Comments

it is well expressed -the magic and fire and beauty of love flowing in every line...

Poetic depiction of love has so befittingly adorned the entire theme.Beauty of love will emerge through the adroitness of your poetic hand only.

your eyes water thinking of me leaving the door open. that is my key to look inside to the heart of the poet who is writing with beauty. very well penned and carries me with you on that journey.

Great, excellent poetry. The metaphors take me to many planes of reading.

Mari, I really love the first line- why do you ask, you know its sheer poetry... passionate, sensuous, lovely images, romance, stirring Mamta

great poetry! It's always a pleasure reading you... wonderfully expressed romantic expressions... Draining this light inside each other Like the moon shining inside of the sun..

A sensitive and colorful imagination that bewitches.

This is not only a Poetry but an exceptional Poetry.Truly great stuff! Brett

Love (and poetry) at your romantic best - with required amount of passion and duly tempered by feminine delicacy...and what a beautiful expression of the fulfilled love! Draining this light inside each other Like the moon shining inside of the sun....

Reading your poem, I feel moonstruck once again, Mari. Its been a pleasure, thank you!

Subtle and sensuous, soft and sinewy: soul searching. I love it. James

agitated emotions, great poem +10

poem of great passion....lovely indeed......10

passion poetic...or the other way round? good piece...imaginative enjoyable...10

Draining this light inside each other Like the moon shining inside of the sun......................silence as intones by rambling of kisses on verdure of green, grin reels upon wishes of beauty engraving as warmth ocean serenades by renaissance of hope, shielding by the flutes of casurina onshore bequeathing haunted sorrows, blooms of golden dew vacillates by grin of heaven, lest quest reemding by reason of truth .by glimpse relative, as semblance of endearment entices in mirth being enlightened, lurid luminance engrosses upon quest of illumination, never yet unconsummated by the breath of breeze by emerald of dream of deep aspassion rippigh throug flames , myth of light as when reflexes upon confluence of divine flows dawn by dew crouches upon ramifying the gleams of unison, ingenious flow of words by eloquence,10++++, thames for sharing

written with passion; a very intimate expression; my favourite line is 'While allowing viewing through the window from the inside....'

Liked the verse before the ending one it's really crafted well. Nice one.

i liked the simile in (blooming as doves that fly in clouds) .......that's a good poem. thanks for sharing.

Awesome poem with a touch of Persian poetic style. If someone had to dream, let him from the eyes. CP

'Those petals of the sweet lemon flower, Blooming as doves that fly in clouds...' i think this is the best part of the poem!