Saturday, March 28, 2009

My Elusive Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I try to reach out to her
She teases me, she eludes me.
Yet
I woo her, I serenade her.
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri
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Carl Harris 08 October 2009

Once again, you have written a very expressive and interesting poem with a charming romantic theme and no doubt many of us have shared this same dream that you experienced, Atreya. That tantalizingly beautiful woman just beyond our reach has caused many fine poems to be written over the years and broken the heart of many a romantic poet as well. I was impressed by the style you wrote this fine poem with, for it made it a very pleasureable read. Carl.

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Hyderabad, AP, India
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