Saturday, August 29, 2020

My Elusive Love Comments

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A long pathway beside the sea
She looks up and she sees me
I walk towards her and she hurries away
Running hard why wont she stay the day
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Paul Warren
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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Heartfelt and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Lamar Cole 29 August 2020

Great poem about my elusive love.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 August 2020

Running hard why wont she stay the day...to get a better rhyme with away. May be

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Paul Warren

Paul Warren

ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
Paul Warren
Paul Warren
ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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