Sunday, October 15, 2006

My Editing Has Been Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

To eliminate a sentence,
To make a paragraph more accepting...
Or censor a comment to make an issue less
Affecting...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 15 October 2006

Thanks Ruby. I appreciate your comments sincerely! I suppose if i was a politician OR delivering a sermon from a pulpit, my outlook would be quite different. However, neither of those I am not. As a writer/poet, my obligation is to be honest within myself I make attempts to express without offending, however, I don't base my deliver on whether someone is going to object to my feelings. That kind of political correctness I leave to the critics. I'm on an expedition that has more to do with the discovery of truth. A truth that frees...not inhibits!

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Ruby Root 15 October 2006

Hi Lawrence, I believe everyone should get a 10 just by being creative and brave enough to write. I myself don't like it when people put me down. Because I think we try our best with our poetry. We have good and bad days. So we may not always write the best. Excellent poem, take care.

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