Saturday, August 30, 2014

My Earth My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone I came,
Alone I shall die,
In between,
Is a passing show!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Luz Hanaii 22 May 2019

" When achieved, Was nothing but a mirage! And with all my courage, I continued my flight, " I've come to enjoy the beauty of earth as I continue my flight. Your words are full of beauty and wisdom, very inspiring. 🌼 Big 10+++

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bri edwards 22 February 2019

to MyPoemList. " D-day" ! i await the moment with bated breath, and ice cream in a great big bowl! bri :)

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bri edwards 22 February 2019

" Beauty is in the eye(s) of the beholder(s) " . Some may enjoy flowers, others boulders... crashing down upon them from above, forest fires sending, winging-off, each dove, gashes in the earth/Earth to mine for coal, air pollutants to bring tears to one's soul, meadows turned into the humans' landfills, oceans adrift with plastic and discarded pills. But I, also, would rather see a beautiful tree. Yes! You and I, Akhtar Jawad, do agree. bri :)

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Bisma Mirza 19 September 2014

Awsum poem... Beautiful

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Valsa George 31 August 2014

We cannot always love things which we haven't seen or felt, but we can always love something which appears nice and benevolent to us! Going after truths which are beyond man's grasp is the business of sages! As human beings, we are in constant touch with Mother Earth and it is something each human must love and try to preserve its pristine beauty without doing any damage to her as it is our home and our lodging between birth and death! A poem with a great message!

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Salini Nair 31 August 2014

we came alone and die alone...in our tenure we have no right to harm any thing...fantastic write.........

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Md Asadullah 31 August 2014

An environment friendly poem, thanks for sharing :)

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Neela Nath Das 30 August 2014

A fantastic thought.From the beginning to the end there's a kind of magnetic attraction that pulls us towards the diction.And thought? I find two hands are protecting the beauty and wealth of the mother Earth.

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Savita Tyagi 30 August 2014

Lovely poem. words flowing so naturally. Love the last lines. Earth is beautiful. Our home, our mother and our guardian. No other world is for us.

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V P Mahur 30 August 2014

Dear bro a nice poem with thoughtful interpretation. Thanks for your comments.

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Lorraine Colon 30 August 2014

I liked your words - I felt them. We arrive alone - we die alone. What we do in between is so important. Everyone plays a part on the stage of life. We must do our best acting - so much depends on it. Excellent poem.

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Tadasha Tripathy 30 August 2014

To fly so high, In search of a truth, May be it's the practical truth of real world.

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 August 2014

A great message in a lovely poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2014

A great message save earth save country........a beautiful bold with patriotism thanks a lot 10

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