Alone I came,
Alone I shall die,
In between,
Is a passing show!
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to MyPoemList. " D-day" ! i await the moment with bated breath, and ice cream in a great big bowl! bri :)
" Beauty is in the eye(s) of the beholder(s) " . Some may enjoy flowers, others boulders... crashing down upon them from above, forest fires sending, winging-off, each dove, gashes in the earth/Earth to mine for coal, air pollutants to bring tears to one's soul, meadows turned into the humans' landfills, oceans adrift with plastic and discarded pills. But I, also, would rather see a beautiful tree. Yes! You and I, Akhtar Jawad, do agree. bri :)
We cannot always love things which we haven't seen or felt, but we can always love something which appears nice and benevolent to us! Going after truths which are beyond man's grasp is the business of sages! As human beings, we are in constant touch with Mother Earth and it is something each human must love and try to preserve its pristine beauty without doing any damage to her as it is our home and our lodging between birth and death! A poem with a great message!
we came alone and die alone...in our tenure we have no right to harm any thing...fantastic write.........
A fantastic thought.From the beginning to the end there's a kind of magnetic attraction that pulls us towards the diction.And thought? I find two hands are protecting the beauty and wealth of the mother Earth.
Lovely poem. words flowing so naturally. Love the last lines. Earth is beautiful. Our home, our mother and our guardian. No other world is for us.
Dear bro a nice poem with thoughtful interpretation. Thanks for your comments.
I liked your words - I felt them. We arrive alone - we die alone. What we do in between is so important. Everyone plays a part on the stage of life. We must do our best acting - so much depends on it. Excellent poem.
To fly so high, In search of a truth, May be it's the practical truth of real world.
A great message save earth save country........a beautiful bold with patriotism thanks a lot 10
" When achieved, Was nothing but a mirage! And with all my courage, I continued my flight, " I've come to enjoy the beauty of earth as I continue my flight. Your words are full of beauty and wisdom, very inspiring. 🌼 Big 10+++