My Dying Bride Ii Comments

Mr Froughi , this poem sounds nice and well -written, thank you

A great poem interestingly written! Admired the quirky intent and literary skill!

A very well expressed piece Amir, the narration dips into the readers minds..making you think more clearly about what the poem speaks of...its very well penned....I give a big 10

interesting narrative poem, very well written, thank you for sharing..............10+++