My Drugs (2003) Comments

Love is a drug that want damage your mind. keep writing.

From a previous critique... ------ This is not complete. You do not give any glues why this is in your life; what is going on here that this is so. When you write, try to explain your writing; try to make sense of what you are saying so the reader has something to pond about; especially in poetry. You can`t state a bunch of facts without giving them weight if you know waht I mean. You have a couple lines that seem to be original. Thank you fr your try. The best to you! ------

Excellent! Brilliant write that is rich in imagery and fine texture! This poignant write looks it was written in a New York City's atmosphere! Love it because it is deep and thought provoking! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...