Tuesday, May 5, 2009

My Dress For Tonight, , , Comments

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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Ken E Hall 19 March 2010

The tower I know liked plain dark colours like what Anne Boleyn wore, you will have to surprise us or was Snow White in a tower.....no that was the wicked witch! in anticipation, regards

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Emu Getachew 23 October 2009

I am willing to wait and be surprised when you pick your words for a night out in the tower.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 October 2009

Anticlimax wow! Great work to keep readers waiting. Ten this and in advance for next LOL Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read and comment on my poem: Why Hack My She or other poems. niv

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Readers always wait for the next… Nice concept. Ten. dr. sakti

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Ying Escalona 19 August 2009

and after that..please dropp by...il do the laundry :)

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James Mclain 08 July 2009

TaMaRa, all await eagerly each treat your dress unfolds in words of grace.. May the wind driven sand wash your feet and hands soft laid in rest...iip

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Kristina B; Williams 05 July 2009

THE DRESS YOUVE GOT IS A PERFECT 10..PLEASE BE SO KIND AS TO REVEISIT MY POEMS N IF YOU GOT TIME, WROTE 2 NEW 1S....BE A MAN, AND DEEPEST DEPRESSION...WOULD REALLY ENJOY YOUR COMMENTS, AND VOTES

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Afzal Shauq 25 June 2009

a sweet piece of work and appreciate your first step towards the tower..must be the tower of success and climb on it to see down..how the world look like.. its impressive idea and liked it very much... well done friend..10++++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

Very lovely and charming write.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 June 2009

wow! a real beautification! 10+

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Saadat Tahir 06 June 2009

sounds like a victorian era fantasy.... with lorn bravados wait...under the tower....while the princess incarcerated above cant decide what to wear very nice ten an cheers

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 May 2009

oh poem is just art of love and color seems to be paints of art, wonderful romance drifting alone from tower above, the luscious glow by dress seduces the reader, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Catrina Heart 18 May 2009

waiting for the poems wearing a dazzling cloth...........

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 May 2009

'wait my poem and my dress above that tower you can guess what it will be and what it's color..' Dress and poem both are beautiful. One is material and the other is immaterial. This poem does sense an aesthetic balance in both. Best Wishes Naseer

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Anjali Sinha 15 May 2009

hey i love this wait my coming poem -10 anjali

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 May 2009

wow tamara, , another amazing thoughts.. sure i can guess, , but will not going to tell you, , thanks for sharing tamara.. hazem al..

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Aziz Alkaabi 11 May 2009

You have some enchanting meter, Tamara. I just adore the word 'color' here. And I commend you for your hope and zeal and wish you all the best with your coming poem.

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Akram Saqib 11 May 2009

A GOOD POEM IS THE MOST BEATIFUL DRESS FOR A POET.

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rago rago 10 May 2009

yes respected madam we wait.........beautiful write...........

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you are a fairytale come true..beautiful write

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