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I am willing to wait and be surprised when you pick your words for a night out in the tower.
Anticlimax wow! Great work to keep readers waiting. Ten this and in advance for next LOL Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to read and comment on my poem: Why Hack My She or other poems. niv
Readers always wait for the next… Nice concept. Ten. dr. sakti
TaMaRa, all await eagerly each treat your dress unfolds in words of grace.. May the wind driven sand wash your feet and hands soft laid in rest...iip
THE DRESS YOUVE GOT IS A PERFECT 10..PLEASE BE SO KIND AS TO REVEISIT MY POEMS N IF YOU GOT TIME, WROTE 2 NEW 1S....BE A MAN, AND DEEPEST DEPRESSION...WOULD REALLY ENJOY YOUR COMMENTS, AND VOTES
a sweet piece of work and appreciate your first step towards the tower..must be the tower of success and climb on it to see down..how the world look like.. its impressive idea and liked it very much... well done friend..10++++++++++
sounds like a victorian era fantasy.... with lorn bravados wait...under the tower....while the princess incarcerated above cant decide what to wear very nice ten an cheers
oh poem is just art of love and color seems to be paints of art, wonderful romance drifting alone from tower above, the luscious glow by dress seduces the reader, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
'wait my poem and my dress above that tower you can guess what it will be and what it's color..' Dress and poem both are beautiful. One is material and the other is immaterial. This poem does sense an aesthetic balance in both. Best Wishes Naseer
wow tamara, , another amazing thoughts.. sure i can guess, , but will not going to tell you, , thanks for sharing tamara.. hazem al..
You have some enchanting meter, Tamara. I just adore the word 'color' here. And I commend you for your hope and zeal and wish you all the best with your coming poem.
The tower I know liked plain dark colours like what Anne Boleyn wore, you will have to surprise us or was Snow White in a tower.....no that was the wicked witch! in anticipation, regards