Sunday, April 16, 2023

My Dreams Sparkle In The Night Sky. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dreams sparkle in the moonlight,
ready to tumble on the sand beach
on the endlessly bending sky
where waves yearn for a ride.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Martinez Salotori 18 April 2023

Good for self, I am not sure how others will take it, I find it more poetic than motivation.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 April 2023

My vision never ends in emptiness reflects your strong optimism.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 April 2023

From start to finish, your poem held mine attention and made me smile. Both Tony Robbins and Robin Sharma would love this highly inspirational and motivational piece. Great job, Dr Nehal!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 April 2023

Wonderful especially the last stanza

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M. Asim Nehal

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