Thursday, September 21, 2006

My Dreams Are The Sun Comments

Rating: 4.8

See that golden hue
Burning in the west
My dreams are with that color
My dreams are the sun
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Dawn Michelle
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Rebecca Bell 19 October 2010

This is beautifully written. I love the metaphor used in it. Amazing poem!

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Dwi Utami 01 July 2010

AMAZING. JUST I.Want say congrat.the the creation poem about sun.is that good, sun is my friend, and friend others, sun is candle in the world, ,

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Cess Kubai 02 October 2009

Au contraire, I doubt that this poet intended this to be positive I think the poet feels that they have no control of their dreams and that things seem to go well for everyone else but them.

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Dawn Michelle

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