Up above the sky
In the faces of aloof stars
I see images of my dreams
Ever growing in stature
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I wanna talk to my shadow during the fading lights I wanna hold forever the illusive rainbows nice words, deep meanings.......may the rainbows be all yours.... please read in my poems, MY DREAM and ASPIRATION.......
Hi Deependra, the greatness of a poet lies in his ability to express a simple thing in a captivating manner. And this poem proves that you have that talent. Great work!
'among my endless dreams a few came true and many fell through but, each of my dying dreams gave birth to a new one'... words enriched by truth and beautiful philosophy...hopes expectations and dreams combined, life really is...good piece 10
nice words, , , , , , i like the thought of this piece of yours...cheers... naizz
great dreams...in this wonderful piece... .nice dreams to achieve and became real... wonderful imaginations formed into wonderful lines.. i love this...inspiring... 10+++
Really powerful imagery with the selective utilization of metaphor and personification, , , , and also the intense message tranformed into a spiritual direction where the dream is the moment where we can begin to meet ourself before our arrival..............
dreams whether fulfilled or not are the fuel of our lives...well depicted
‘But, each of my dying dreams gave birth to a new one…’ It is recycling of dream in new concept and canvas. Dream is cream of life. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comment on my poem. Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv