Saturday, February 21, 2009

My Dreams And I Comments

Rating: 4.8

Up above the sky
In the faces of aloof stars
I see images of my dreams
Ever growing in stature
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

‘But, each of my dying dreams gave birth to a new one…’ It is recycling of dream in new concept and canvas. Dream is cream of life. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comment on my poem. Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Nikunj Sharma 09 August 2009

I wanna talk to my shadow during the fading lights I wanna hold forever the illusive rainbows nice words, deep meanings.......may the rainbows be all yours.... please read in my poems, MY DREAM and ASPIRATION.......

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 March 2009

this poems resonates among many, i love it!

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Raja Basu 01 March 2009

Hi Deependra, the greatness of a poet lies in his ability to express a simple thing in a captivating manner. And this poem proves that you have that talent. Great work!

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Kesav Easwaran 22 February 2009

'among my endless dreams a few came true and many fell through but, each of my dying dreams gave birth to a new one'... words enriched by truth and beautiful philosophy...hopes expectations and dreams combined, life really is...good piece 10

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Stacey Watts 22 February 2009

Beautiful poem about dreams. Follow your dreams always.

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Naidz Ladia 21 February 2009

nice words, , , , , , i like the thought of this piece of yours...cheers... naizz

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 February 2009

great dreams...in this wonderful piece... .nice dreams to achieve and became real... wonderful imaginations formed into wonderful lines.. i love this...inspiring... 10+++

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Barry A. Lanier 21 February 2009

'When we forget to dream we forget to breathe'-BAL

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Barry A. Lanier 21 February 2009

Really powerful imagery with the selective utilization of metaphor and personification, , , , and also the intense message tranformed into a spiritual direction where the dream is the moment where we can begin to meet ourself before our arrival..............

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Chitra - 21 February 2009

dreams whether fulfilled or not are the fuel of our lives...well depicted

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