Tuesday, February 21, 2023

My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw you last night.
It's been nearly three and a half years.
I was worried about you,
perhaps more for myself.
...
Read full text

Smoky Hoss
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 15 March 2023

A magnificent heaven full of stars for this poem, Smoky.... you know how to talk heart to heart, soul to soul, which is the gift a true poet possesses

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 15 March 2023

For even in the dark, some light unexpectedly appears, here and there, promising 'more to come'.----------that describes your poetry, my friend, to a T.

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 15 March 2023

partn 2---'Aren't dreams amazing. Like returning comets in the night, waving.'--what a perfectfully beautiful way to write your heart thoughts down for us to read

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 15 March 2023

Read this again today and I swear I cried harder the second reading than the first--Smoky, you have a way of connecting to your readers

0 0 Reply

This poem ranks #35 today in the Best Poems of Members. Congratulations

0 0 Reply
Glen Kappy 07 March 2023

I relate to the feeling of this, Smoky, as it comes across warm and tender in your words. -Glen

0 0 Reply

This poem is ranked #37 on the Top Members Poems on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Smoky. All the best..

0 0 Reply

Emotional, sentimental, touching. The dream, the flow of images, memories read extraordinarily moving. Excellent poetry, Smoky. Top score and MyFavourites..

0 0 Reply
Belle Wassermeister 28 February 2023

Terrific poem, Smoky. Heart-wrenching and sweet at the same time. As Kim said, you WILL see her again.

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 24 February 2023

a heaven full of starlight for this and a fav

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 24 February 2023

you have such a talent for writing about life's grief in a way that brings gratitude for memories that cause such pain and relieves that pain with hope

1 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 February 2023

Smoky, this poem pulled at my heartstrings Bravo! ! !

1 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 23 February 2023

Thank you for this unforgettable marvel.

1 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 23 February 2023

So deep[y sentimental and far reaching, Just, conquers, soul and heart. A most beautiful dream of remembrance and true love, that can never fall apart. I cried tears of sadness and joy, intermingled

3 0 Reply
Kim Barney 21 February 2023

Excellent poem, Smoky. I have added it to my favorites and voted it 5 stars. You will see her again, and not just in your dreams.

3 0 Reply
Smoky Hoss

Smoky Hoss

U.S.A.
Close
Error Success