I saw you last night.
It's been nearly three and a half years.
I was worried about you,
perhaps more for myself.
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For even in the dark, some light unexpectedly appears, here and there, promising 'more to come'.----------that describes your poetry, my friend, to a T.
partn 2---'Aren't dreams amazing. Like returning comets in the night, waving.'--what a perfectfully beautiful way to write your heart thoughts down for us to read
Read this again today and I swear I cried harder the second reading than the first--Smoky, you have a way of connecting to your readers
This poem ranks #35 today in the Best Poems of Members. Congratulations
I relate to the feeling of this, Smoky, as it comes across warm and tender in your words. -Glen
This poem is ranked #37 on the Top Members Poems on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Smoky. All the best..
Emotional, sentimental, touching. The dream, the flow of images, memories read extraordinarily moving. Excellent poetry, Smoky. Top score and MyFavourites..
Terrific poem, Smoky. Heart-wrenching and sweet at the same time. As Kim said, you WILL see her again.
you have such a talent for writing about life's grief in a way that brings gratitude for memories that cause such pain and relieves that pain with hope
So deep[y sentimental and far reaching, Just, conquers, soul and heart. A most beautiful dream of remembrance and true love, that can never fall apart. I cried tears of sadness and joy, intermingled
Excellent poem, Smoky. I have added it to my favorites and voted it 5 stars. You will see her again, and not just in your dreams.
A magnificent heaven full of stars for this poem, Smoky.... you know how to talk heart to heart, soul to soul, which is the gift a true poet possesses