Tuesday, March 16, 2010
My Dreams Comments
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Each night I go to bed wondering one thing,
Will I ever be free from my parents who don’t let us do anything?
Sometimes I think no I won’t
But then I remember the ones who love me,
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7/27/2025 12:08:16 PM # 1.0.0
Very good job. The emotions flow deep as you read the poem. Word choice is very good, and the ending wraps it up nicely and even. It seems like it should have another part to it, where the dream actually comes true, you know? I'll read the rest of yours as they are submitted. (: Keep up the fantastic work! -Zander