Wednesday, December 2, 2009

My Dreams Comments

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I taste her sweet lips
As I sleep
She creeps into my dreams
Like a sexy fairy
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Grayson Givens
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April Piesinger 11 December 2009

i love it has emotion an passion... i loved how you used ' she gets me high' and 'she kisses me with words'

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sky dreams 06 December 2009

a lot of emotion projected in these words.. very passionate write

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Grayson Givens

Grayson Givens

Oakland, Ca
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