Thursday, September 6, 2018

My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dreams vanish like a ripple
Of water when it gets to the coast,
like the gentle touch of a drizzle
Disappears with the kiss of a rose.
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jose javier berbel marin
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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2020

Your diction is a complete delight, very powerfully and movingly crafted from the heart. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jose.

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