Thursday, January 3, 2019

My Dreamful Life Comments

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My Dreamful Life
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Today,
The sleep has left me,
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Prabir Gayen 27 August 2020

To day, The sleep has left me, Tired body drops to soundless intensity, Resting to trance but no sleep cajoles to embrace, In the far corner of the Mind a tiny cloud gathers, The dark cloud of worry..! ! !

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

The lifting stream and uncontrolled dream with love laden-heart and frustration with sweet rejection, Hope and hopeless flow of life, Together embraced...! !

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Prabir Gayen 20 June 2020

The wandering breeze and uncertain form, In the nature of things everything is uneasy, ///

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Biswajit Roy 18 June 2020

Hope and hopeless flow of life, Together embraced.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2019

IT appears too long but deep can you think of paragraphing my suggestion only take it or let it through your fingers seep GREAT METAPHORY HERE POET ME SEES PG

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Prabir Gayen 04 January 2019

Thanks dear poet...it was very long too...but writing I slept and my finger clicked on delete button...most part of the poem is deleted...I could not recollect.....it is one third...I will keep in mind your suggestion....thanks..

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