Thursday, July 6, 2006

My Dream World Comments

Rating: 4.9

I build my castles every day....
And tear them down, again in such a way,
And it is quite a wondrous way to play,
When life is hard and full of pain,
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Howard Johnson
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Kelsi Brockway 02 February 2012

Very well written. I really like the symbolism used. Thank you

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Tsira Goge 08 March 2008

'Where I just love to be alone, ' - Do not worry, from it poets are ill... Tsira

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This is a gorgeously well-crafted little poem. I love the opening, building castles every day and then tearing them down, such symbolism.

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Samantha lynn 01 February 2007

I love the poem Howard very good. i'm sorry, I'm in school at the moment so i can't finish commenting every poem so i'll tell you know that i love all your poems. They are very moving and very well written. Please feel free to check my poems out. Samantha Lynn<333

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Diane Violet 21 December 2006

Our dream world is a wonderful place to escape to and just relax. Like this a lot! Howard............All the best, Diane

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Anna Cellmer 16 November 2006

We all have such worlds but this what is beautiful is the fact how good is to share some of it sometimes as here for example. Great special write I like it very much, have a wonderful day and dream too it's a great part of this life we have

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Jolanta Gradowicz 19 October 2006

What a true poem... Jolanta

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Duncan Wyllie 09 October 2006

Now this I like, a very enjoyable etheral feel to it, as though flooting on a cloud Wonderfull Love duncan X

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Pia Andersson 01 September 2006

Hmm.clever...I have read your poem a few times now and i cant figure..at first your dream world seems like a perfect place to be..but thats not the feeling I get reading your poem...interesting..I like your poem-Pia

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Dee Daffodil 07 July 2006

Howard...Your dream world sounds like a wonderful place to escape to...I guess we all in our own way...have our dream worlds...enjoy yours...it's there to provide you with mental and emotional rest! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 06 July 2006

Sounds like a divine place to go, the peaceful palce, thanks for sharing. Patricia

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