Tuesday, September 20, 2005

My Dream Of Reality Comments

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Last night I was awake
while all the others slept.
I left my bed and wandered
through the house we've neatly kept.
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Brian Dorn 30 July 2006

GREAT poem, Mary! How's that for reality! ! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2006

'I've done nothing to deserve them.' Really Mary? Really?

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Tony Jennett 12 October 2005

Just over halfway sifting through your posted popems. Your style certainly seems very popular. Maybe I should adopt it? Keep at it Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 September 2005

And did you hear the pin that the angel dropped? H

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Pha Thanh Gian 21 September 2005

sirene, calm and lovely poem... :) Kudos

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Egal Bohen 20 September 2005

Beautiful poetry Egal Bohen...

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Ernestine Northover 20 September 2005

Hi Mary, what a sweet poem, I doubt if my husband would know I was up and about, he sleeps so heavily nothing wakes him, I can assure you. Sincerely Ernestine

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Theorem Thetruthserum 20 September 2005

Loved the poem it was really good.

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Michael Philips 20 September 2005

Wow, John Kay took the words right out of my mouth. I was going to say that I like the concept of moving around the house with each room eliciting an emotional response.

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John Kay 20 September 2005

What I liked most about this poem was the structure, the strategy of walking through the house at night alone and finding something special in each room. That's good poetry for me.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 September 2005

Lovely family life.....

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