Saturday, May 25, 2013

My Dream (No.2) Comments

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Dreamt one day, a serene truth
There came an old man and put
His one of hand on mine and said
Come, won’t you see? My dear lad
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Aftab Alam
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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

nicely written poem. with good message

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David Wood 27 May 2013

A lovely poem with a good message Aftab.

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Ruby Mostazir 27 May 2013

Whole nature repeated the same... Allahu Akbar! Allah is great! nice 1.

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Vishal Sharma 26 May 2013

wonderful poem with the high spirit my fav one just soul searching

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Chandra Thiagarajan 26 May 2013

A wonderful poem spelling the glory of God! EXcellent write, Aftab!

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Wahab Abdul 26 May 2013

wonderful poem...with a sharp message in a style of a story which is the main strength of the poem..10

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spirituality is in its hight in this poem

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Aftab Alam

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