Sunday, October 24, 2010

My Dream Girl Comments

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O, as marbles of her beautiful face,
And eyes, as intoxicating stream,
She leaves her beauty at every pace,
She is almost the girl of my dream.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Bernard Snyder 03 September 2011

I've asked this same question my friend. The answer still evades me! Nice poem!

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Sidikat Abdul 23 March 2011

it is surely written by a talented and pure mind, keep up the good work

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Amy Marie 16 December 2010

Another well-written poem of yours :)

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

Bahraich, India
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