Thursday, July 24, 2008

My Dream Destination Comments

Rating: 3.0

When we sleep in the night,
we get wonderful dreams.
Hundreds of miles away,
ther's a place of happines and gay,
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Rema Prasanna 25 July 2008

you take me to me a destination, a paradise a wonderland, you are a pegion of a peaceful paradise.. I like this one.. you write well. keep them up.10 Rema

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Kee Thampi 24 July 2008

the poet may fly to this wonderland it is not a room or a hall it is a paradise like place without any barriers or walls.

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