Friday, May 6, 2011

My Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

You and I walking down the aisle,
Holding your hand, we both not sad.
But happiness fills our hearts and glory fills our eyes.
The beauty that surrounds us and the love that’s around us.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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