Thursday, August 6, 2009

My Dream Comments

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Populated by a swarm of
Warrior ants,
Life can be a dangerous ride,
Hailstones are thrown from the
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Claudia Krizay
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Chris Mendros 06 August 2009

'Hailstones are thrown from the/Messiah’s inner- fury as/Fire is rekindled beneath my feet, ignited by the demons of my past.' What a strong evocation of such a singularly frustrating condition! '...If they could only quench the/Anger that torments my very essence would be my lifelong aspiration...' If only, indeed! R.D. Laing theorized that schizophrenia was a higher form of consciousness, but i could never figure out how that could matter to anyone forced to make a way through this order-driven world we're all treated to. This is strong and evocative writing, tho, illuminating, disturbing, brutally honest.

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