Monday, July 6, 2009

My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.1

The burden of reality, and conscious procedures
prevent me from fully recalling just how vivid your presence was
though, I can venture with enough forethought, to express it:
Your hair seemed to float in a dance of jubilation through the air,
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Hunter Dasten
COMMENTS
Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2011

Amazing! This deep and heart touching write clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World. This thought provoking write is well penned and poignant! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 17 February 2010

Dreams - of Love and God, synonymous. Poetry, a phantasmal journey from within skies of depth and spiritual oceans of sky Chart your course and visit there forever ...louie

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 29 January 2010

I've read many poems about dreams-just finished reading for the 2nd time 'The Alchemist' your poem of 'My dream' is delightful. the burden of reality can prevent one from savoring dreams as they're being pursued. I enjoyed the style and its flow. I'm giving it a 10-however when I vote it does not register. Keep writing and thanks for inviting me to your poems and welcome to poem hunter!

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Makayla Straight 28 January 2010

I hate to say it, but you are a better poet than me... I was just kidding I would say that you are better than me any day... Nice job. Keep up the good writing

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Danny H 03 August 2009

Awe.mazing :) Whoever this one is who inspires your poems, she must be a great deal of worth with what such kind words your provide for her.

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Shannon Willner Brand 10 July 2009

i think this is a great poem straight from the heart i love it great job! ! !

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

I am not strong enough, to wake up with your face in my minds eye. I am not strong enough, to handle that, when you're nowhere in sight. I love these lines..Simply beautiful

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Danielle Guscott 07 July 2009

Again - simply brilliant. You have such a beautiful way with words.

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Chhavi Anupam 06 July 2009

Marvelous, superb, fantastic. the beauty, sensitivity, purity...all touch, no this poem shakes you up. Chhavi Anupam

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