My Dream Comments

nice poem, well written..10

nice poem, yeah everyone should have a vision and mission to carry it out in right path...

That's hope. Or as you call it a dream. Beautiful poem!

Great piece of art. It gives the imagination good thought. This lets the reader visit and has good wonder. I have a poem entitled 'Treasures' you might like to read? Thank you for the invitation to read more of your poetry! DC

fantastic, uplifting. great write

We all need a dream, to carry on; A capstan to anchor on. From me to you and onwards; A treasure to be passed on; A treasure to be passed on; ..... hard work needed as all dreams not come true..but very vivid description... well thought of verse....10 read mine 'All drams cnot come true' and butterflies around

'My dream' is a lovely poem, easy to read and understand. I get bored with long poems, but this one kept my attention to the end.............love the rhyming as well. Thank you

dream is certainly a treasure in us........ let it be carried and passed on earth...