Saturday, June 21, 2008

My Dream Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I think of one thing
only one thing I think
will I ever fall in love
or the thirst will remain
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Asif Baloch
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

'Soon I'll die with the thirst inside me and no one will be here to fulfill my dream' Strongly I disagree with the last lines, and 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

may your thirst for love be satiated soon...

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Donai Raouf 21 June 2008

i liked it ..pleasant

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