Friday, November 2, 2012

My Dream Comments

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My dream is slowly drifting near, then
stands still, aloof hanging like a pear.
Let me touch as it nears.
Let me indulge in its thousand flavours
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Godfrey Morris
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Heather Wilkins 29 November 2012

beautiful dreaming.

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Heather Wilkins 29 November 2012

In all my tears, through all my fears it is this dream I will savour. lovely thoughts.

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Louis Rams 29 November 2012

without a dream to carry us through, we would'nt know what to do.

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Valerie Dohren 15 November 2012

A great dream, and a great write.

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Anita Sehgal 09 November 2012

in all my tears, through all those fears it is this dream I will savour- touching lines..!

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Far Lapenna 07 November 2012

Yeah, great poem, i can really see the imagery you wish to portray - I would read that again and again

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Valsa George 06 November 2012

This is a lovely poem! It is certain dreams that make us thrive through life's trials and tribulations!

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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