Monday, October 10, 2005

My Down Day Comments

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When Life dost seem to pass me by,
I look through my window, I look at the sky,
When my body aches and does not work,
There are jobs I must do which I canna shirk.
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Jonathan Goldman a.k.a JGthepoet
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Joseph Harskamp 16 September 2006

very good...it got me write in the stomach....i loved the way you described the emotions....loved it.

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