Friday, July 5, 2013

My Donkey Has To Keep Quiet Comments

Rating: 5.0

My donkey can speak and he has forgotten to bray like others
I tell him to speak about these times
And he speaks like a god of our yesterdays.
He nods his head all the while and silences my ‘nays’
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The Donkey here is the symbol of this Hippocratic world.The perfect blending of magical realism in poem.Great write.thanks.jk

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Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

Funny and quirky with a kick at the end! !

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Soumita Sarkar 10 July 2013

A satire and a reminder of Animal Farm..........brilliant.I invite you to read my poems and rate them.Thanks.

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Dinesan Madathil 07 July 2013

Dear Ramesh Rai sir, I have written about a donkey and by turn he may next write about me.... ha ha ha Thank you for sharing your views.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2013

Good Write. Enjoyed reading it.

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2013

are you telling abouut whom? few days back a post appeared on my face book, 'donkeys r in danger ' as a joke i commented how many now reqd. but just below i complied the fact. but here donkey for what? but a beautiful write.

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Elena Sandu 06 July 2013

Hahaha witty! The more philsophical, the more hillarious it got. Hahaha chasing his brothers calling them idiots, for ruining his dreams.. Yummy I love the taste of bitter sweet. Great poem, it made my day, thank you!

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Heather Wilkins 05 July 2013

a good write. enjoyed the read

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Gajanan Mishra 05 July 2013

good poem, I like it and its writing .

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M D Dinesh Nair

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