Sunday, May 5, 2013

My Doll Comments

Rating: 3.5

I have a charming little doll
its name is Rose to call

She has curly brown hair
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Hira Akhtar
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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2014

The man with the name of Jesus Christ is insulting this great name. It's a beautiful poem.

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Jesus Christ 07 April 2014

Yes it does matter because I'm Jesus Fool!

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Hira Akhtar 02 April 2014

it doesn't matter if you don't like..thanks for reading by the way :)

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Jesus Christ 02 April 2014

I don't like it at all. It the worst

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a beautiful poem about your doll good imagery keep on writing

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Free Bird 30 August 2013

this poem reminds me of my childhood when i use to play with my doll every time, talking and playing with it. i still use to play with them in my spare time..u have described your doll in a very beautifull way/ hi to her from me :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 August 2013

simple and sweet of course like your doll.liked it.

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Abhi Shek 03 July 2013

Nice one.... Presentation of rhym is very gud

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Vipins Puthooran 01 July 2013

then that's a nice doll....good writing.... top markss for your doll....

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Wahab Abdul 22 May 2013

sweet writing.. clear and clean.. love it..carry one

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Shahzia Batool 21 May 2013

this school life creative writing works wonders in later years! ! !

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Yasmin Khan 18 May 2013

Sweet, dolls are girls' dear 'friends'....you remember me my own childhood.

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Bright Morn 12 May 2013

So sweet a peice u wrote for ur little sis, really enjoyed the read,

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Gajanan Mishra 05 May 2013

i love my doll. thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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