Monday, September 28, 2009

My Dog Died Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dog died.

He was lifted straight to heaven
Through the holy gate
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Valsa George 24 March 2020

Master! I was told On the earth, with My life with you there My term in got washed off! ........... This gives a chuckle to me! But I don't think you can be such a horrible master with your kind of disposition! However quite a humorous write!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2019

An exellent poem, with tinge of irony and using the tennis terminology. Such an enjoyable read and with humor. Thank you for sharing, Kesav. I was in PH on 2011 and you in 2009. Two years earlier than I and sinds your return in January 2019, I don't see you anywhere.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 May 2010

Interesting poem, Kesav...I enjoyed how you used 'My Dog Died' to explain human situations and coping with: physical, social, and religious. Especially how communication has changed.

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Lynda Robson 29 October 2009

Very amusing write and I like the idea of an e-dog mail, lol thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 15 October 2009

hats off to your repartee with your dog, inter posed with the game of tennis. I have a lot to learn from you

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 14 October 2009

hi some lines are poetrical and some lines appeare prose formats.any how this thread is nice.keep it up....10

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Emu Getachew 14 October 2009

witty and prolific poem...i take heaven over any place on earth. I will keep you on my to read lists of poets 10++++

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Chitra - 13 October 2009

amusing and touching...experimental in tone...I like the blend of emotive value and hi-tech factor (e-dog) well done Sir

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Al Ramos 12 October 2009

Man's best friend here with us, he deserves to go to heaven, no more chasing sticks for our entertainment.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 October 2009

Expecting sadness, found humour instead. Congratulations on yet another Poem with a difference - thank you for the smile I am wearing right now... and each time I look at a dog no doubt.

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Nalini Hebbar 12 October 2009

yeah, it's different...thanks for the laugh...and very well written, I must say...regards

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nice humorous piece.. but eh, anything in heaven is better than here... i like it

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Saadat Tahir 12 October 2009

u hav woven cards game and pooch care in a poem...well written unique... and fun to read... well done kesavji cheers

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Patti Masterman 11 October 2009

I read this three times and then became tickled by it's humor. Very clever..(smile) Hope my dog doesn't think life with me is hellish..lol.

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 11 October 2009

really, , , one of the witty piece i have ever read... but i am a doubting thomas and still doubt that you were a bad master and he faced an ordeal on earth, since he mailed you! :) but it can be quite possible that he was really faithful to u.... (i think that way) since he got Heaven...! ! thank God! 10/10

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Sandra Martyres 11 October 2009

A brilliant doggy piece Kesav, replete with humour and a little twist in the tale too..I loved it...10 of course

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I was about to say may GOD bless him..it was a beautiful meaningful and funny poem..well said

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Obinna Eruchie 11 October 2009

This is vivid, and it calls for a careful study. But it is an innovative piece with humour, no doubt.

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Rakesh Bedi 11 October 2009

A nice experimental poem, sir......regards....

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Raj Nandy 11 October 2009

Kesav ji, You have used the tennis terminology effectively, adding humour to your poetry! Thanks for sharing! -Raj

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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