My dog died.
He was lifted straight to heaven
Through the holy gate
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An exellent poem, with tinge of irony and using the tennis terminology. Such an enjoyable read and with humor. Thank you for sharing, Kesav. I was in PH on 2011 and you in 2009. Two years earlier than I and sinds your return in January 2019, I don't see you anywhere.
Interesting poem, Kesav...I enjoyed how you used 'My Dog Died' to explain human situations and coping with: physical, social, and religious. Especially how communication has changed.
Very amusing write and I like the idea of an e-dog mail, lol thanks 10 Lynda xx
hats off to your repartee with your dog, inter posed with the game of tennis. I have a lot to learn from you
hi some lines are poetrical and some lines appeare prose formats.any how this thread is nice.keep it up....10
witty and prolific poem...i take heaven over any place on earth. I will keep you on my to read lists of poets 10++++
amusing and touching...experimental in tone...I like the blend of emotive value and hi-tech factor (e-dog) well done Sir
Man's best friend here with us, he deserves to go to heaven, no more chasing sticks for our entertainment.
Expecting sadness, found humour instead. Congratulations on yet another Poem with a difference - thank you for the smile I am wearing right now... and each time I look at a dog no doubt.
yeah, it's different...thanks for the laugh...and very well written, I must say...regards
nice humorous piece.. but eh, anything in heaven is better than here... i like it
u hav woven cards game and pooch care in a poem...well written unique... and fun to read... well done kesavji cheers
I read this three times and then became tickled by it's humor. Very clever..(smile) Hope my dog doesn't think life with me is hellish..lol.
really, , , one of the witty piece i have ever read... but i am a doubting thomas and still doubt that you were a bad master and he faced an ordeal on earth, since he mailed you! :) but it can be quite possible that he was really faithful to u.... (i think that way) since he got Heaven...! ! thank God! 10/10
A brilliant doggy piece Kesav, replete with humour and a little twist in the tale too..I loved it...10 of course
I was about to say may GOD bless him..it was a beautiful meaningful and funny poem..well said
This is vivid, and it calls for a careful study. But it is an innovative piece with humour, no doubt.
Kesav ji, You have used the tennis terminology effectively, adding humour to your poetry! Thanks for sharing! -Raj
Master! I was told On the earth, with My life with you there My term in got washed off! ........... This gives a chuckle to me! But I don't think you can be such a horrible master with your kind of disposition! However quite a humorous write!